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creative writing, escape, fiction, life, nature, ocean, poem, Poetry, sea, spilled ink, spilled thoughts, spilled words, summer, thoughts, travel, words, writer, writers block, Writing
Thursday morning… in my usual spot on the hill, staring out to sea, sinking this view into my memory to call at will when life returns to its normal frantic pace. I started considering the colours of the ocean, what caused the changes that swirl past my eyes moment by moment.
The sun is trying to make itself know intermittently between the thick clouds. The tide is going out and the ocean floor will be being dragged with the force of the moon. She’s still in the sky, just.
I feel, in the face of all this power of nature, the need to splash the colour across the page is immense but the words to describe it just don’t arrive and it’s like shaking a bottle of lemonade knowing the gas inside is under pressure. As I said recently to a friend struggling with the feeling of being blocked, ‘write anything, a list, a letter, just write… So here’s my rather inadequate attempt to let the gas out of my head, to describe the indescribable.
Rippling Moss Gold
Reflecting Aqua
Foaming Melange
Uplifting Azure
Flirtatious Fivulet
Swathing Cornflower
Tinting Turquoise
Shimmering Latchmere
Deep Poseidon
Forbidding Bosporous
Enticing Antiquity
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Please, if your mind joins in, add to this!
You hooked me with the first paragraph and now I’m envious of your spot. It’s gorgeous!
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So beautiful here Eric, in a wild, natural way. So changeable, unpredictable, always refreshing.
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Those are wonderful qualities to have, both in a place and a person.
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I don’t mean to offend and I did enjoy your poem, but I had the distinct feeling I was reading the colour names on tins of Dulux paint!!
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🤣🤣🤣🤣 and you’d be right!!!
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Although it was a bit more ‘artists pallet’ because I’m more familiar with that.
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Great advice to your friend. It’s the only way to overcome writer’s block. We just gotta keep writing! Think I’d quite possibly die if I gave it up. Hope you’re doing well. ❤️
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