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Let me lie you down…
Knees bent over the side of the bed, prop up on your arms so you can raise your head, I want you to watch.
I’ll gently push your knees apart and kneel down between your legs, my hands massaging your thighs, thumbs circling into your muscle, fingers gripping. Watch my fingers make their journey across your skin, see the mischief dance in my eyes: mischief, desire, need and power, I may be on my knees at your feet but the power is all mine and you know it.
Twitch that hard cock at me darling, let me see him move, how eager he is. Keep your hands at your side, watch me enjoy you. I’ll lick your shaft, underneath from the base up so you can see my eyes appear, hungrily assessing you as my tongue circles across the tip of your cock. Long, drawn out exploration of your beautiful shape, I want to remember how he feels in my mouth, I know you’re impatience for more but this is my time and I shall have you here where I want you, for as long as I need, to worship you. Be still.
You’re wet now, so I shall blow cool air across the moisture, can you feel that?
And then I’ll suck you in deep, swirling my tongue as I thrust you into my mouth. I love to hear that gasp, the whispered swear words you utter as ecstasy escapes on your breath. Wet heat engulfs your mind as my mouth works your head. My hand is wrapped around your shaft, stroking him with a little twist, saliva helping my movement, feeling your hips try to pulse into me. My hand cups your balls, massaging, squeezing, pulling a little. A finger slips behind your balls and teases the opening to your anus, just teasing the ring of sensitive nerves as my mouth and hand keep on caressing you. Your head falls back with a moan and I chuckle, throaty pulses sending sensation across your glans. Swearing a little louder now darling? Good…
Pushing a little further, my finger inside you now, pumping, finding a rhythm. Fingering your channel as you thrust up into my mouth. Yes, darling, now, now you can hold my head, wrap your fingers in my hair.
And just when your breathing hitches and I can feel your ball sack tighten, I’ll thrust that finger deeper on to your prostate and graze my teeth across that full cock head and you’ll explode, yelling my name, ribbons of cum falling deep into my throat.
Then, then I will hold you, softly in my arms, kissing your hair as you catch your breath.
© Juliette Turrell
aussiescribbler said:
You had me at “Let me…” I love your technique… Your writing technique, of course!
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Juliette Turrell said:
It’s all about technique isn’t it… grip the reader, draw them in, make them feel…. your writing technique 😉
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aussiescribbler said:
So that they give you a standing ovation and shower you with accolades. :p
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Juliette Turrell said:
Only if it’s deserved, obviously…
One must practice ones technique to strive for perfection.
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A. Shepherdson said:
Omg 😮 wonderful sexy erotic writing you actually have me bucking all tingly and twitching slightly (btw I’m NOT doing anything lol just like to make that clear 😉 )….……… and being blown and coming inside a lady’s mouth is possibly the best sex I have ever experienced………. 😀 just sayin!!!
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Juliette Turrell said:
I’ll try harder next time Andrew 😉
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A. Shepherdson said:
I’ll have to admit having my prostate massaged was okay if only for the wicked happy ending.
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A. Shepherdson said:
………….by a Romanian lady!!!!!
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Juliette Turrell said:
As an aside… I did have a reader from Romania today… It’s pretty high on my bucket list of places I want to see…
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Juliette Turrell said:
You go for it, nobody ever reads the comments anyways, all deeply personal observations on life, the universe and everything always welcome….
One day we shall have to meet for coffee so you can tell me what you’re really thinking 😉😂
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A. Shepherdson said:
I went for it, she was an incredibly beautiful lithe young lady, slim and pretty (yes I paid for a full Swedish massage) anyways the short story is I lay on her bed legs wide apart totally naked. She sat cross legged between them wearing the tightest and thinnest material stretchy leggings leaving NO illusions as to what her open vulva looked like oh and no knickers, a burgundy bralette also, so sexy with a sweet smile ❤ . Well she wore a glove with lubricated finger on one hand, and curled her fingers around my hardness with the other and you'll guess what happened next!!!! I gazed at her sexy crotch and well I enjoyed the HJ rather than lol the prostate tickle then finally smiling all the time she took me to a heavenly climax………. only wish she'd taken her bralette off but then she wasn't an escort so all's good good 😀
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AC @ The Cracked Lens said:
Good lord, yes please…where do I sign up? Seriously hot and I felt that all the way through. 🔥 🔥
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Juliette Turrell said:
All applications to ‘sign up’ in writing please… 😉
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Juliette Turrell said:
I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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pvcann said:
I can’t breathe 🙂
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Juliette Turrell said:
Please do breathe… breathing is important… I’m not sure my resuscitation skills are quite up to scratch.
Oh, wait… interesting ploy! 😆
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pvcann said:
Indeed, but now you’re onto it, damn. 🙂
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Eric said:
Wonderfully descriptive! Mind blowing honestly. I am a little breathless, and a lot aroused. That bit of sweetness at the end though, that’s heart melting. Bravo!
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Juliette Turrell said:
Thanks Eric, that bit of sweetness makes it worth while, intimacy rocks.
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Eric said:
Oh for sure. I feel dirty and used if all I get is the sex part. The intimacy before, and after (and during if I’m lucky) are where its at. Odd coming from a dude I’m sure, but true nonetheless.
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Juliette Turrell said:
Not so odd at all, something I’ve heard often. Most men like intimacy…
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Eric said:
Huh…well from my experience its not expected, and surprisingly not desired. Its rather disappointing.
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Juliette Turrell said:
I’d agree! I like it too much! Heads would roll 😏
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Eric said:
Lol I’m sure you would make my eyes roll back in pleasure lol
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Juliette Turrell said:
Let me count the ways…
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Eric said:
By all means, enumerate them for me…
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Fiery said:
Masterful. If I had a cock worthy of such worship I would be throbbing with pleasure. I don’t have one, to be clear. I appreciate your skills though, J. Very steamy 🔥🤯
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