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My bedroom door doesn’t latch,
It makes me a cross patch,
When it wakes me at night,
Giving me such a fright!
With its creaks and its groans,
Metallic hinges moan.
It wakes the dog and he growls
So I block it with towels,
Wedge it shut with a shove!
And a curse to above.
But then the wind blows
And creeeeeaaaak the door goes!
So I pull the windows closed,
But then there’s no air to my nose,
And the dog he does smell,
So I lie there a spell,
But there’s no hope for me now,
I get up, check the towel,
Push the window open wide
And slip back inside,
My warm duvet nest,
Snuggle down, sigh and rest.
Then the wind blows
And creeeaaakkk the door goes!
©️ Juliette Turrell
writesforher said:
Oil! Or some lube…whatever.
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Juliette Turrell said:
I tried that! The hinges are just old.
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johnlmalone said:
I like it; I like the humour , and the creepiness . and, you know what, the narrow, tight little rhymes work 🙂
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Juliette Turrell said:
Thanks John 😃 it reminds me a bit of the Julia Donaldson books I used to read the children when they were small ‘Room on the broom’ for example, I’ll never be in her league but it’s a similar pattern.
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johnlmalone said:
I love her books too esp the Gruffalo 🙂
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A. Shepherdson said:
🙂 Hmm I enjoyed this.
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Juliette Turrell said:
😃 Good 😌
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